From 0668cb28332bb5151bfe2e9b8e05e2a5d9a3b000 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: alisonkit <alisonkit@tuta.io>
Date: Wed, 4 Sep 2024 11:47:57 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] site text fixes

---
 main/index.html | 19 +++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/main/index.html b/main/index.html
index f60a48a..f55d6d0 100644
--- a/main/index.html
+++ b/main/index.html
@@ -13,6 +13,8 @@
             <a href="#gallery">Gallery</a>
             <a href="#about">About</a>
             <a href="#contact">Contact</a>
+            <a href="/comms">Commissions</a>
+            <a href="/live">Livestreams</a>
         </div>
         <div class="main"><!-- container to push stuff aside from nav bar -->
             <!-- home -->
@@ -20,7 +22,7 @@
                 <br>
                 <h1>Alison Kira</h1>
                 <h2>My WAH-bsite!</h2>
-                <p>I'm an illustrator, animator, and comic artist. I draw furry art and anything cringe.</p>
+                <p>I'm an illustrator and animator that draws furry art and anything cringe.</p>
             </div>
             <!-- gallery -->
             <div id="gallery">
@@ -40,26 +42,27 @@
             <div id="about">
                 <h2>About</h2>
                     <ul>
-                        <li><p>25, she/they</p></li>
-                        <li><p>EN/ES</p></li>
-                        <li><p>Red Panda fursona</p></li>
+                        <li><p>25, she/her</p></li>
+                        <li><p>Speak English, Spanish</p></li>
+                        <li><p>My character is a Red Panda</p></li>
                         <li><p>Latine</p></li>
-                        <li><p>Very queer and autistic</p></li>
+                        <li><p>Very queer and neurodivergent</p></li>
                     </ul>
                     <br>
                 </div>
             <!-- Contact -->
             <div id="contact">
                 <h2>Contact</h2>
-                <h3>Disclaimer: some links may contain mature/NSFW content not appropriate for all ages.</h3>
+                <h3>Disclaimer: some links contain mature/NSFW content not appropriate for all ages.</h3>
                     <p><a href="mailto:alisonkira@tuta.io">Mail</a> >>> for commission contact</p>
                     <p><a href="https://ko-fi.com/alisonkira">Ko-Fi</a> >>> tip me!!!</p>
                     <p><a href="https://cohost.org/alisonkira">Cohost</a> >>> for thoughts</p>
                     <p><a rel="me" href="https://mastodon.art/@alisonkit">Mastodon</a> >>> fedi!!!</p>
-                    <p><a href="https://bsky.app/profile/alisonkira.art">Bluesky</a> >>> better twitter</p>
+                    <p><a href="https://bsky.app/profile/alisonkira.art">Bluesky</a> >>> basically a better twitter</p>
                     <p><a href="https://twitch.tv/alisonkira">Twitch</a> >>> Art Streams!</p>
-                    <p><a href="https://twitter.com/ayyalison">Twitter</a> ...sigh</p>
+                    <p><a href="https://twitter.com/ayyalison">Twitter</a> ...why do we still use this</p>
                     <p><a href="https://discord.gg/t7X5uUEC/">Discord</a> >>> let's hang out!</p>
+                    <p><a href="https://t.me/alisonkira_art/">Telegram</a> >>> art feed!</p>
                     <br>
                 <h3>Commissions are open.</h3>
                     <p>For current commission slot availability, check social media for any annoucements.</p>